Prompt: free
Bombs would fall
You knew that.
Oil. Hello….
Pariah head in the 80s
nowadays as Green Bookish.
The arsenal in Tripoli
or those launching from the Mediterranean Sea
are no match to what you can let loose.
the unregimented legacy of Zeus.
Positive nerve, will, tuition
Free them all to fruition.
Linked with Sunday Scribblings
The horror of civil war can barely be visualised in our cosy western homes. Now with the world so small we eat that dirt too and feel the hurt that will end in tears.
It’s all a bit unnerving isn’t it? Love your economic use of words.
War is a terrible, terrible thing. Unfortunately we live in such dangerous times. That’s an awesome write up! Dropping by from SS 🙂
Happy Monday!
Yes, the sparsity of your words made this piece all the more hard-hitting..a great comment on the world at present..Jae
You took a completely original path with this prompt. Thought-provoking to say the least.
Here’s my FREE piece:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/01/31/you-me-and-fibonacci/
I love how with only a few perfectly selected words, you not only share your message, you bring us all into it as well, telling us right away “You (we) Knew that…”
Great post.
Meryl
http://departingthetext.blogspot.com
love this, very powerful..
🙂
Creative and original. The first line pulls me in.
Bombs would fall…